The house on mango street Essay
The Prompt I Used: To write this essay, we had to choose a prompt to focus on. The prompts were, Esperanza's growth throughout the book and how three different women influence Esperanza's decision to rely on herself to be successful. The prompt I chose was Esperanza's growth throughout the book. Esperanza starts being insecure and ashamed of her poverty, the way she looks and being a women, but as when we keep reading, we notice some changes. Esperanza starts to feel more confident and is beginning to ignore people's negative comments. At the end of the book, Esperanza is a young confident woman that is not letting anything stop her from being successful.
My Initial Grade: 72/100
My Final Grade: 82/100
Skills I Mastered: I believe that the skill I mastered by writing this essay is writing the body paragraphs. I think I'm really good now and understand what to write first and what to write last.
Skill I Have To Work On: I think that the skill I have to work on is staying on topic in the introductory paragraph and the conclusion paragraph. I sometimes get of topic and start writing about something not related to the prompt I'm writing about. Staying on topic will help my essay be way better.
My Essay:
My Initial Grade: 72/100
My Final Grade: 82/100
Skills I Mastered: I believe that the skill I mastered by writing this essay is writing the body paragraphs. I think I'm really good now and understand what to write first and what to write last.
Skill I Have To Work On: I think that the skill I have to work on is staying on topic in the introductory paragraph and the conclusion paragraph. I sometimes get of topic and start writing about something not related to the prompt I'm writing about. Staying on topic will help my essay be way better.
My Essay: